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Use This New "Mind Movie" Writing Method to Craft Sales Emails So Vivid and Entertaining, Your Prospects May Just Compulsively Read Every Word Before Reaching for Their Wallets*
(*You will see results IF you actually finish the training and apply the methodology. This program is NOT for you unless you have the time and ambition to develop a new skill.)
Transformational Sales Emails combines proven direct-response marketing research with the storytelling techniques of realist fiction to help you understand what your readers genuinely want and need—and then turn those insights into wildly entertaining and resonant emails that carry more momentum into the sale.
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Join a training + exclusive community of copywriters, marketers, and business owners who are already using this proven system to produce a new, remarkably immersive "Mind Movie" style of copywriting that commands attention like a great film and compels action like a relevant and timely sales letter.
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Transformational Sales Emails, VeryGoodCopy's flagship training and exclusive community, is on sale for only $499 (50% off) until Friday, October 16 @ 11:59 pm CST OR once 300 are sold (whichever comes first.)
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FREE BONUSES INCLUDED↴
As part of Transformational Sales Emails, you also get access to:
 Your Five FREE Bonuses↴
When you take advantage of this special offer, you'll get instant, life-time access to these 5 bonuses, free, with your purchase:
âś… + Bonus #1:Â "Big Ideas" Video Micro-Course (FREE)
âś… + Bonus #2:Â "VeryGoodTags" Video Micro-Course (FREE)
âś… + Bonus #3:Â "Hidden Micro-Lessons" Series (FREE)
✅ + Bonus #4: "VGC: The Podcast" Audio Interviews (FREE)
âś… + Bonus #5:Â "The Lost Letters" Series (FREE)
Sale Ends Friday, October 16 @ 11:59 pm CSTÂ
OR once 300 are sold (whichever comes first.)
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Start transforming your emails—and your potential sales—the very same day you finish this self-paced training:
Inside this cohesive, meticulously crafted video training, you'll discover how elite copywriters in 2026 are:
1) Using AI to uncover more nuanced, specific, and highly usable information about a market than a human ever could...
2) Using human craft to write better, more compelling—and more lucrative—emails than a machine ever could...
It's superhuman research meets super-human writing. The most complete system available for:
1) Truly understanding what moves readers...
2) Turning that understanding into sales emails your prospects actually want to read, potentially transforming your revenue...Â
But you're also getting so much more that...
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You will also gain access to an exclusive community of students, where you can hone your new skills together:
Included in this offer is access to living, ever-expanding library of Transformational Sales Email examples. It will never stop growing. I will continuously upload:
1) Real-time writing: long-form videos of me writing a Transformational Sales Email from scratch, narrating my decisions along the way.Â
2) Real-time walkthroughs:Â long-form videos of me explaining finished emails, breaking down the craft behind each element.
3) LIVE student writing reviews: long-form videos of me reviewing and editing a TSE student’s email live, with detailed feedback anyone can learn from.
There's no cap on this module. Every new email I write to sell TSE will become a new lesson. Every student submission that comes in will become an opportunity to go deeper and explore the versatility of this system and style.Â
The library (and its value) will compound in perpetuity.
Right now, if you’re reading this on the TSE checkout page, access to Module 4 is included with the purchase price.Â
In the near future, this will change: as the library grows, I will move Module 4 behind a separate paywall. Students who join after that happens will pay for access.
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Inside you'll find 56 video “micro-lessons” across 4 main modules:
Total run time:
3 hours, 23 minutes
9 video micro-lessons across 3 submodules...
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Before you can do any research, much less write a word of copy, you gotta understand how markets actually work: why people buy things, why they don’t, and what has to be in place first for your email campaign to have a real chance of succeeding.
Some tips inside Module 1 include:
- The not-so-subtle “twist” you can put on your email copy to make your landing page far more compelling, engaging, and effective. (It’s probably the single best way to make the reader emotional before they ever arrive.)
​ - The two-part click trigger that not only gets readers to click at a higher rate, but also primes them for the sale. (You already know part one, but part two is almost always overlooked and arguably more important.)
​ - Forget features and benefits. This is actually the most captivating and compelling thing about your product. (Use it to make even the most skeptical buyers more likely to believe your claims.)
​ - A clever way to make your product or service feel undeniably singular in the market (even if your competitors sell something very similar).
​ - Even if your product’s most powerful selling point is something every competitor also has or does (i.e., a feature, a benefit, a manufacturing process) this is how to ethically associate it with your brand (rendering all others less relevant).
​ - How to make an old product feel brand-new and exciting (without changing a single thing about it).
​ - And so much more…
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20 cohesive video micro-lessons across 4 submodules...
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Inside, I systematically break down my “Desire Drilling” research process, sharing everything I do to develop an intimate, almost clinical understanding of practically any market.
It marries human research and AI to produce something incredibly valuable to copywriters, marketers, and salespeople: a clear, specific picture of your market’s most significant desires—not just what they are, but the emotions and beliefs below the surface (the things prospects feel deeply, but rarely say out loud).
And because the Transformational Sales Emails system is engineered like a lock and key (i.e., the “Research” and “Writing” modules are designed to fit together), you will be able to take this data directly into Module 3, where you’ll discover how to immediately start using it to write your emails.
But first…
Some tips inside Module 2 include:
- ​The eight questions you, the copywriter, must personally answer before AI gets anywhere near your research. (Get these wrong and everything downstream—your desires, angles, and ultimately the email itself—starts drifting off course.)
​ - ​The career-changing conversation I had with one of the most prominent direct marketers in the world. (What I learned forever changed my copywriting mindset, approach—and results.)
​ - Most copywriters never use this remarkably reliable research method (originally developed by the winningest copywriter of the 20th century) because it’s so involved and tedious, but I give you an AI fix that delivers it with push-button speed.
​ - ​How to use AI for the “grunt work” part of research, so you can spend more time on the creative decisions that actually move the needle.
​ - ​The creative judgment calls you should never, under any circumstances, outsource to AI (no matter how “good” it gets).
​ - How to prevent the all too common blunder that degrades otherwise great research and potentially leaves your campaign in peril. (It’s astonishing how typical this is, even among experienced copywriters.)
​ - A repeatable method that can completely safeguard your AI-research process.
​ - Why the most useful research insights rarely show up in surveys, reviews, or on sales calls (and where to find them instead).
​ - How to turn a trivial complaint into a deeply emotional email angle using just one question many copywriters never think to ask.
​ - Copywriters usually don’t feel comfortable writing about this “hidden” buying motivation—and it’s costing them untold sales.
​ - Believe it or not, you can uncover the most persuasive line in your next email from something your prospect would likely never admit in an interview (or even an anonymous survey).
​ - This straightforward method will reveal your market’s deepest, most sincere desires (and help you identify which one has the most persuasive power).
​ - Your research turned up a dozen desires, but which one should your marketing focus on? Use this proven, “old-school” scoring system to rank each desire, so you can identify the one with the greatest selling potential.
​ - ​The most important word in marketing is not “you” or “free” or “new” or anything else you’ve probably heard. It’s far less typical, but embracing it will help you create all sorts of standout marketing assets, including sales emails.
​ - ​How to convert the prospect who already wants your product but keeps saying, “Maybe later…”
​ - Hands down the most valuable skill an email copywriter can possess—and how to develop it in just minutes a day.
​ - This is how ”future-proof” copywriters are using AI.
​ - One reason you might dread writing sales emails—and the simple mental shift that could actually make you look forward to it.
​ - The unexpected yet legitimately life-altering side effect of studying Transformational Sales Emails.
​ - And so much more…
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27 cohesive video micro-lessons across 7 submodules...
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Inside, I dissect and demonstrate (in granular detail) the vivid, eerily immersive “Mind Movie” writing method I’ve been developing since 2014: it’s the style behind almost every VeryGoodCopy essay, newsletter, and email that helped me grow the brand into what it is today.
I’ll show you how to naturally blend the emotion and resonance of “realist” literature with the persuasive principles of direct-response copywriting to create a distinctive (and addictive) style of writing, one that draws readers in like a great film and then compels them to act like a well-timed sales letter.
Some tips inside Module 3 include:
- This writing style—unique to VeryGoodCopy—creates undeniably vivid, relevant, and moving email copy.
​ - How to get your readers to practically write your email for you.
​ - ​A storytelling approach that makes your emails so engrossing, prospects could actually lose track of time while reading.
​ - The simple question that exposes the flattest lines in your copy—and how to bring that dull writing to life.
​ - How to make the reader literally “feel” your writing (generating emotion that drives up clicks and sales).
​ - The editing technique great film directors use to make audiences lean in, and how to use it to pull readers deeper into your sales emails.
​ - The counterintuitive way to write hyperrealistic dialogue (used religiously by skilled Hollywood screenwriters) that will captivate your prospects and compel them to compulsively read, and read, and read.
​ - Committing to this stylistic choice could immediately pull readers into your email.
​ - ​Your email’s best opening line is probably buried somewhere in the middle of your copy: here’s how to find it.​
​ - The 5-part structure that lets you turn virtually any story into a sales email (without the reader ever suspecting you were going there).
​ - How to write the most persuasive part of your sales email (the part that makes readers feel almost uncomfortably understood).
​ - ​The "uneasy truth" prospects needs to read in your email (and why saying it earns more of their trust than any compliment ever could).
​ - The stupid-simple “T&T” technique that will keep your readers hooked all the way through your pitch.
​ - The surprising reason you may want fewer links in your sales emails (even if more links would produce more clicks).
​ - Even though your analytics can’t tell the difference between these two clicks, your sales page can (and that’s where it counts).
​ - Stop writing subject lines that tank your open rates when this method can deliver eye-popping results.
​ - The best subject lines are hiding in plain sight: this unusual approach can help you write subject lines that blow your average open rate out of the water (without resorting to clickbait).
​ - This writing approach can give you that “lighting-in-a-bottle” feeling every time you sit down to craft an email.
​ - How to actually enjoy writing again (or perhaps even for the first time in your life) while also creating sales emails that work.
​ - Why the best, most vivid and persuasive story-driven emails take place in this type of setting.
​ - This 5-second test can immediately (and reliably) reveal weak writing.
​ - And so much more…
Real-time writing & walkthrough videos
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LIVE student copy reviews
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Modules 1, 2 and 3 are a series of 56 cohesive videos that break down—in a clear, prescriptive, systematized way—how to think about, research, and write this unique style of sales email. Module 4 is a living, ever-expanding library of Transformational Sales Email examples. It will never stop growing. I will continuously upload:
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Real-time writing: long-form videos of me writing a Transformational Sales Email from scratch, narrating my decisions along the way.
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Real-time walkthroughs:Â long-form videos of me explaining finished emails, breaking down the craft behind each element.
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LIVE student writing reviews: long-form videos of me reviewing and editing a TSE student’s email live, with detailed feedback anyone can learn from.
I constructed it this way because I wanted TSE to feel less like something you consume once and file away, and more like a living body of work you can keep returning to as your own writing develops.
There's no cap on this module. Every new email I write to sell TSE will become a new lesson. Every student submission that comes in will become an opportunity to go deeper and explore the versatility of this system and style.Â
The library (and its value) will compound in perpetuity.
Right now, if you’re reading this on the TSE checkout page, access to Module 4 is included with the purchase price.
In the near future, this will change: as the library grows, I will move Module 4 behind a separate paywall. Students who join after that happens will pay for access. Â
Don't delay. Join now to get lifetime access to Module 4 at no additional cost (no matter how large it gets or what it costs everyone else down the road).Â
Right now, in the Age of AI...
Something unexpected is happening:
The rise of “slopaganda” is driving an almost unprecedented demand for great copywriting:Â
Marketing departments everywhere are learning this lesson the hard way because while AI can instantly generate coherent copy, it can only produce, at best, relentlessly, unquestionably average copy. Dead center, middle-of-the-road stuff.Â
The industry has created a name for it:
slopaganda
slo·pa·gan·da
​noun
The flood of hastily generated, AI-produced messaging designed to persuade, but too average to move anyone.
"My inbox is wall-to-wall slopaganda!"
These days, if you have good, accurate research—and that's a big if—anybody can slop up a generic email in seconds.
But will it get read?
Much less arrest the reader?Â
Much less make the reader feel something:Â
Emotion—a feeling—precedes action.Â
Emotion, more than anything else, drives response.
That's why I created Transformational Sales Emails:Â
Inside...
I break down the unique style and approach that makes my VeryGoodCopy micro-lessons so moving:Â
And then...
I show you how to use VGC's emotional style to write sales emails.Â
Across (at least) 56 remarkably cohesive video micro-lessons, I've systemitized how to emulate VeryGoodCopy's famous writing style to:Â
- write emails your prospects actually enjoy reading—and you actually enjoy writing...Â
- tell vivid, engrossing stories your prospects will immediately visualize and relate to...
- sound like yourself—human and distinctive—and not robotic or templated...
- change your prospect's mood before they click, so they arrive at the next step of your sale process with a degree of emotional momentum, primed to take action...
The TSE system I lay out is exactly how I write sales copy for my own clients, including:
​So...
Will this training work for your industry?
As long as you can sell via email, the answer is yes.Â
The research and writing approach inside Transformational Sales Emails will show you how to meet any buyer precisely where they are, so they feel seen, understood, and incredibly motivated to take action.
Let me tell you a story...
I’m about to deliver my all-time highest-paying client project, an email campaign:
I’m in my home office, presenting the work via Zoom. The client’s team, about half a dozen people, have gathered together in a conference room to listen to me.
“Hey folks,” I say. Everyone says hello back. “Let’s get started.”
I share my screen.
“First I’m gonna read the emails,” I say, “then I’ll show my work, like math class.” I smile and the room chuckles politely.
The marketing director, the person who hired me, is sitting at the head of the conference table. She closes her laptop and leans forward. She keeps her hand in a fist under her chin as I read the first email in the sequence.
I read the subject line, the preview text, and the body copy as the group follows along on my screen. I read for about 90 seconds before the words run out and the email ends.
I look up. Nobody speaks. I’m about to break the silence when the director leans forward.Â
“Eddie—” she says. “Eddie—”
She puts her forearms on the table and looks around the room.
“Yes?” I say.
“Eddie, how did you do that?”
“How did I do it?”
“How did you write like that about us?” she says. “About our product of all things.”
I nod and switch tabs. “I’ll show you exactly.”
Fact is...
I can write this way about anything, including whatever you are selling. As long as you have a good product for a specific market, I can write like “that” about it...
And so can you.Â
Let me show you exactly, too, inside:Â
Transformational Sales Emails is on sale for only $499 (50% off) until Friday, October 16 @ 11:59 pm CST OR once 300 are sold (whichever comes first.)
FREE BONUSES INCLUDED↴
As part of Transformational Sales Emails, you also get access to:
FREE BONUS #1↴
Big Ideas:
How to "Invent" Irresistible Marketing
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Inside: a 22-minute, 64-slide presentation + 3335-word transcript
This incredibly clear (and mercifully concise) Video Micro-Course breaks down one of the most important concept in all of marketing: the "Big Idea".
It's how Purple became one of the biggest mattress companies in the world. It's how Gary Bencivenga—arguably the greatest copywriter in the world—sold Christmas hams. It's what the largest newsletter publisher on the internet depends on to run a multibillion dollar empire. Most marketers have heard of it, but you've never heard it explained and presented like this before. And once you do, you may never look at copy the same way.Â
Start watching instantly, and for free, when you pick up Transformational Sales Emails for 50% off.
FREE BONUS #2↴
VeryGoodTags:
Reverse-Engineering the Greatest Taglines Ever Written
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Inside: a 22-minute, 59-slide presentation + 3102-word transcript
Writing a tagline can be maddening. Think about it: you're taking an entire business—everything it does and everyone it serves—and boiling it down into sludge, into a single sentence. It can feel like an impossible task, and depending on your approach, it is.Â
This Video Micro-Course will give you a reliable process for producing professional-grade tags, demonstrated by reverse-engineering some of the most beloved lines ever created. Whether you've written a thousand taglines or none at all, you'll walk away with a way of thinking that works for any product, business, and market.Â
Start watching instantly, and for free, when you pick up Transformational Sales Emails for 50% off.
FREE BONUS #3↴
VeryGoodCopy:
The Hidden Micro-Lessons
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Inside:Â 16 unpublished VeryGoodCopy Micro-Lessons
If you enjoy the VGC's content, this free bonus will give you instant access to over 4-months worth of "hidden" Micro-Lessons that were never published inside the newsletter.
You'll read about how to write copy, how to edit copy, how to think creatively, how to grow on on LinkedIn, how to market your demo calls, how to publish testimonials, how to pick copywriting clients, and much more.
This collection, written in VeryGoodCopy's signature style, is yours, free, when you pick up Transformational Sales Emails for 50% off.
FREE BONUS #4↴
VeryGoodCopy:
The Podcast
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Inside: Nearly 2 hours 3 of audio interviews with legendary copywriters, Ben Settle, Dave Harland, and Drayton Bird
I sunsetted the VeryGoodCopy Podcast because I realized, pretty quickly, I didn't have enough time for it. I am, however, incredibly proud of the work I did produce. My conversation with Ben Settle alone surfaced so many fascinating takeaways, including:
- Where the “real money” is in copywriting…
- The simple principle holding most freelance copywriters back…
- The activity Ben credits for teaching him how to write about even the most mundane topics in interesting, compelling ways...
- The best thing a new writer can do to improve…
- Why “one” is the most dangerous number in business…
- Why you should not position yourself as an “expert” in your niche…
- What it means to build your own “walled garden” as a copywriter—and where to start…
- How and when businesses should use long-form copy sales letters…
- Ben’s personal research process for creating sales letters…
- The “magnificent” copywriting book Ben recommends to everyone…
- A perfectly clear and simple explanation of the most important copywriting principle…
- One of the two best investments Ben has ever made in learning Direct Marketing…
- The most valuable thing Ben learned from one of the best copywriters in the business…
- What “A-List” copywriters talk about when nobody’s listening…
- Copywriting is hard, unless you know this…
- Why Kim Kardashian is actually one of the world’s highest paid copywriters…
- The most memorable—and inspiring lesson—from Ben’s favorite marketing book…
- Your “best friend” when it comes to storytelling…
- An “advanced” copywriting technique…
- Which businesses should be emailing their lists on a daily basis…
- How to sell a commodity via email…
- Cautionary advice: how to “train” your market not to buy from you…
- Good personal branding advice “nobody is going to take” from Ben…
- Where engagement comes from—and how to create it…
- What copywriting really comes down to…
Start listening instantly, and for free, when you pick up Transformational Sales Emails for 50% off.
FREE BONUS #5↴
The Lost Letters:
Why Great Controls Perform
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Inside: Analysis of 7 mega-successful sales letters you've probably never read
From the very beginning of my copywriting career, I've been reading, studying, and copyworking (transcribing by hand) successful sales letters. It's probably the most effective way to internalize persuasive principles and techniques, which is why I recommend it to every copywriter I mentor, whatever their experience may be.Â
The Lost Letters is a series I created (but never shared publicly) that highlights seven magnificent controls even serious students of copywriting would fail to recognize. These sales letters, though largely unsung, were unbelievably effective, running unbeaten for years, even decades—and inside, I break down exactly what made them work.
Start watching instantly, and for free, when you pick up Transformational Sales Emails for 50% off.
Frequently Asked Questions
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Thank you so much for being here.
I appreciate your time and consideration!
If you have any questions, please email me at eddieshleyner@verygoodcopy.com.
With gratitude,Â